Peer Review for Sarah Hansen

Who
      Sarah Hansen

What
      Open Post to Peer Reviewers

What Activity
          Make a content suggestion
   I made the suggestion that Sarah needed to add more credible sources to make her argument more solid, along with that trying to use less biased language so it doesn't just sound like an attack on Trump.

Helped?
        I hope so. She has good premise just needs a lot of refining

Incorporation
         Incorporated sort of the need to address counter argument and ensuring that it is not just sounding like an angry rant.

Admirable
         It's admirable that Sarah was open enough to share a very personal story within the work, it strongly increases the amount of pathos she generates as well as generally being a super brave thing to do.