Sunday, April 24, 2016

Peer Review for Avalon Lubera

       Time to give feedback really late in the game    

Who: Avalon Lubera

What: Revised Post to Peer Reviewers

Activity: Copy Editing 
        Suggested to her to have more citations incorporated into her work to increase her credibility

Helped?
        I think I helped her so hopefully she would have more credibility in her argument so people would listen to her.

Incorporated
       Incorporated the importance of having credibility

Admire
       I admire her choice of argument, it's a pretty important topic that needs more notice


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