This seems like a weird point at which to peer review because it's not really a lot of stuff to review a person on.
Who: Gaby MArty
What: Production Report
Activity: Form Recommendation
I commented on how in the genre conventions of the college essay she may want to be careful in word choice so she doesn't lose the people she is arguing against.
Helpful?
I hope so? Maybe it'll help her when actually writing the rough cut
Incorporation
I just didn't incorporate anything
Admirable
So far from the little I can read since the posts are only like partial paragraphs of a rough copy, I really admire how Gaby is approaching the argument and she has sources to back up her work and it is all pretty admirable.
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