As with any work, the final cut is different than the beginning rough draft, and with my work it's no different.
Content Change
The content changed in a couple ways, primarily the change in content was putting in a full quote by Dr. Nighorn instead of just a rough summary quote that I had considered using.
Form Change
The form changed in many ways, I actually recorded it so it became in the correct form for the genre that I had been writing for instead of just a rough script. Also in addition of just recording the writing in my voice, the inclusion of background music and Dr. Nighorn's quote helped fit the form.
Selection from Rough Cut
“However we could discuss the general all day, to get to the more specific we will discuss the paper “Local interneuron diversity in the primary olfactory center of the moth Manduca sexta”, the authors of which are Carolina E. Reisenman, Andrew M. Dacks, John G. Hildebrand, for as Dr. Nighorn said “[there is no solo authoring in the field]”.
Re-Edited Selection
Edited Section
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