Another Editorial Report

      As with any work, the final cut is different than the beginning rough draft, and with my work it's no different.

Content Change
       The content that was changed within this section of words includes some additional words before the laser puller citation, emphasizing parts of it. Along with that I added a few words to the last paragraph to emphasize the importance of the citations towards ethical appeals

Form Change
         The form changes echo much of the last report. I added music to give the section a more entertaining flow and a happier mood. The quotes from the paper are read by a different person to give the listener's some variation to hopefully keep interest.

Selection from Rough Cut
         

There are citations on both the filament and the laser pull used. For the filament it is referenced as:

(1 mm outer diameter, 0.58 mm internal diameter, Sutter Instruments Co., Novato, CA)

And the laser puller is from:

(P-2000, Sutter Instruments Co., Novato, CA)

These credible sources are important towards ethical appeals because they back up the author’s claims and help prove that the findings from this research are true and have repeatable results, which are very important to statistical power and research being accurate.

Re-Edited Selection

Edited Section